Summary ======= This paper studies the problem of network inference problem for the RDS (Respondent Driven Sampling) diffusion process. This random diffusion process models a standard procedure used in epidemiology studies. Under this model, the authors formulate the network reconstruction process (finding the unknown graph over which the diffusion took place) as a MAP (maximum a posteriori) optimization problem. The contributions are: * showing that the objective function is log-submodular * giving a "variational inference" algorithm: the objective function is approximated by linear lower and upper bounds and solving for those upper and lower bounds provides an approximate solution to the problem * experiments showing the validity of the approach Comments ======== The problem of network reconstruction is important and hadn't been studied from this perspective in the context of Respondent Driven Sampling. While the experiments show that the suggested approach works well in practice, I find the paper to be lacking a conceptual/technical contribution: * it was already shown that the log likelihood was submodular in [8] for the closely related continuous-time independent cascade model. Even though the diffusion process here is slightly different, this result can hardly be considered novel. * the suggested approach (approximating the objective function with linear lower and upper bounds) was alread suggested in [5], including the specific choice of the lower and upper additive approximations * the formulas from [5] are barely instantiated to the specific objective function at hand here. It could have been interesting to show how the general framework of [5] leads to a simple algorithm for this specific problem, but no algorithm is provided and very little is said about how the computation should be performed in practice. For example the paragraph starting at line 252 is very vague. * no theoretical guarantees are provided for the approximation obtained by the suggested approach. Some guarantees were obtained in [5] under a curvature assumption. It could have been interesting to show which form these assumptions take in this specific context.